Here is a story Neetu composed at school and made its way home. Its here in it entirety exactly as she composed it, spellings, grammar et all. I just had a good time reading it.
Crystal Unicorn was walking in the park one afternoon when she steped on a rock. Ow! Ow! Ow! sh yelled. All her friends ran to her she brok her leg! Her friends said to rest but she could'ent she needed to go and take people on special trips. Her friends keepet on telling her and telling he but she won't listen to them. She said to watch her said. Katlyn said. She walked slowley there. Then OW! She hurt herslef OW! OW! OW! She said She sat and waited. She said to the crowed sh well have to wait and rest before they go on the trip. She said we'll rest for a week then they would go on the trip. After a week she went on the trip but it took a week. So when she came back it was chrismas she was very sad She almost mist chrismas. But she got a persent it was a small unicorn.
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